Navy Info Chief for Michael Weinstein: Cut out Adjectives
Navy Chief of Information RADM John Kirby didn’t write a personal letter to Michael Weinstein, but he might have been thinking about him when he emailed naval officers and told them to stop the “jargon and gibberish,” as well as excessive adjectives. Criticizing his own service’s communications efforts, RADM Kirby said:
We’ve never met an adjective or adverb we didn’t like.
We don’t “exploit operations in the electromagnetic spectrum.” We fully exploit them. We don’t integrate functions; we seamlessly integrate them…
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